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Author Topic: All caps for military operations, ordnance, etc.  (Read 11781 times)
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« Reply #30 on: August 19, 2008, 06:06:26 PM »

Disingenous. At best.

I'll not be bullied.

I'm done here.

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« Reply #31 on: August 20, 2008, 12:30:30 AM »

All, I was asked to have a look and offer an opinion.  Having read through this conversation, I'm going to have to support (guess!) a compromise.  It never gives me no joy to step in and overrule any editor, so I of course want to have a go-around or two with you, Howard, if you are willing.  But you have explained yourself very well so far.  I am curious if you can be prevailed upon to reply explicitly to the actual merits of the arguments I am about to make.

Before I get into this, though, let me just remind everybody that our standards of civility here are the same as on wiki talk pages.  If anyone says something that violates CZ:Professionalism, it should indeed be reported and then removed by a constable; this is a moderated discussion.  I saw only a few very harsh comments and unless someone insists that I (or a constable) remove them, I will let them stand.

As to this from Martin:
According to Editorial Council Resolution 0011, which was recently passed, every workgroup has the right to set its own style and formatting provided that it is not blatantly inconsistent with CZ style. Although there seem to be some exceptions to the usage of uppercase for military operations, clearly it is the professional view of this editor that it is a norm for US codenamed operations. If he wishes to set it as a style for the workgroup, then (along with other editors for that workgroup) he may do so. I cannot imagine that the Editor-in-Chief will intervene as there is no "legal" basis for him to do so, but Citizens have the right to request such.

Well, let's be clear.  Howard has authority as an editor.  But he does not singly make up a workgroup; he is one editor, and one editor does not a workgroup make.  As such, I can indeed overrule him, Martin, and there are "legal" grounds for me to do so.  After all, if I have any Editor-in-Chief role in the project at all, one of them must be to interpret our editorial rules when they are not clear--as our naming conventions (and our workgroup decisionmaking rules for that matter) evidently are not, in this case.  Howard can try to get some other editors in his workgroup to support his position and overrule me, of course.  And also, the issue might be appealed, if anyone feels that is necessary, to the Editorial Council, which can revise its own resolutions if necessary.

By habit (and lack of time), however, I feel it is a good idea to "pick my battles" wisely because the intrusion of "the law" into a problem, especially in a collaborative project, often creates more problems than it solves.  This particular battle seems important for me to wade into, simply because so many valuable Citizens seem to need more definitive closure.  Besides, I do think a reasonable compromise might be in the offing.

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One of the conscious differences between Citizendium and Wikipedia is that Citizendium is not, in a general sense, a democracy.

WP is a mobocracy; CZ is a constitutional republic.  CZ is a democracy in the traditional sense that sovereignty rests with the people, albeit in a law-governed system.

On to the matter at hand.

My approach has been to stay as close as possible to the capitalization rules that apply to the primary documents.

This doesn't strike me as being a supportable principle in general; if the primary documents are not consistent with broader usage, we go with the broader usage.  That is a basic naming convention for CZ, workgroup decisions to the contrary notwithstanding.

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I freely admit that individual documents and organizations violate certain rules, but I see little choice but to use the authoritative U.S. references, as having the best chance of helping a reader read original materials, and to keep the articles here as consistent as possible.

It is irrelevant whether source documents or source organizations violate rules of ordinary publishing, because they are not ordinary publishers.  If we were a military organization, we might prefer to follow the usage; but we aren't, we are a reference project.  So it is perfectly acceptable that our standards be different.

This is a point others have made, obviously.  It is also a point that, as far as I can tell, you have never directly responded to, Howard.

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I have published four books and contributed to others, which generally followed the Chicago Manual of Style. When dealing with military and intelligence security conventions, in the context of information security, copy editors (Macmillan, Wiley, Addison-Wesley among others), I explained the reasons for using intelligence and military conventions. ...

Well, I believe it is very much a relevant question whether, generally speaking, in scholarly, popular, and reference books, code names are given in the all-caps style or in the initial-caps style.  I am not sure why you insist that the standards of the government ought to determine the standards of civilian publishing.  David makes a credible point that CMS and many publishers use just an initial capital letter.

If I am not mistaken, you will want to insist that this doesn't ultimately matter and instead that what matters is what the Experts in this case--who work for the military--say the rule is.  But I want to point out carefully that this begs the question.  To assume that we should follow military-employed experts in this case is to say that the usage of those experts should determine our usage.  I believe I want to disagree with that, because experts sometimes do have idiosyncratic usage that does not comport with the usage of a general reference work such as CZ.  In other words, if CZ were a work by and for government-employed military experts, then it would make sense for usage to be determined by those experts.  But since CZ is a general reference work, our usage is determined by what is in common and recognizable currency among "peer publishers" such as other general encyclopedias, newspapers, magazines, and the like.

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In dealing with technical material, I believe the primary authority should be the creator of the naming convention.

That seems reasonable.  But much of the material here is not merely technical but has considerable interest outside technical military circles.  That is why, in fact, other encyclopedias and our peer publishing resources evidently do not feel beholden to the primary authority in this case.

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I have yet to understand the problem created by following primary sources. David, do you have examples of how CODE NAMES has caused a problem in writing or reading, other than not being consistent with one style manual?

There is probably no great problem; this is yet another tempest in a teapot as far as I can tell.  But there is a small problem, and it is that something other than the common usage might be (if David is correct) jarring and strange for someone who does a lot of reading about military operations.  You might recall that I myself asked you about this earlier, Howard.  It seemed a bit jarring to me.  I think the reason it is jarring is not that all caps are especially hard to read, but because unusual conventions call attention to themselves--as for example if I spell "dawg" like that, it's easy enough to read but weird because that's not what you're used to seeing.  Moreover, one might well accuse us of a kind of pretentiousness in following the specialist usage when this is clearly a generalist work.

I can give you an example in my own field that clarifies what I mean.  Some philosophers, when "mentioning" words instead of "using" them, use single quotes, like this: 'exists' is not a predicate.  They reserve double quotes for quoted speech: Descartes said, "I exist."  Now, if you read encyclopedia articles about philosophy written for a general audience, you frequently will find people using the double quotes indiscriminately, which is how they are ordinarily used, according to good usage.  This deliberately violates the professional philosophical convention I described in order to create prose that is more readable, and less jarring, for the ordinary reader.

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In a discipline-specific article, I wish to be consistent with the discipline, but I have no overwhelming desire to be consistent with what a layman "expects". The issue about the "lay reader" recurs again and again, but often dies out when confronted with some of the issues in math and sciences -- there simply is no way to put expressions into lay terms. I suppose I could write out, in prose, the words that describe a partial differential equation or a chemical structural formula, but if someone presented that prose to me, I'd have no idea what was meant.

I am inclined to agree with your first sentence when the emphasis is on "in a discipline-specific article."  But what is a discipline-specific article?  Is "Operation DESERT STORM" a discipline-specific article?  No, it is not, not if by that phrase you mean a topic that is only treated within the field of military operations, analysis, or what have you.  I would not have any objection whatsoever to your using the specialist usage if the topic really is so specialized.  But let us be clear: merely because the leading experts about a topic are military experts who use all caps in their own documents, it does not follow that the topic is a "discipline-specific topic" in the sense you mean.

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I'm sorry, but in this case, I believe the Director of National Intelligence reference document to be more authoritative than the Chicago Manual of Style.

I can't agree, for reasons I've outlined.  David gave the perfect reply to this, by the way: the military itself does not use the all-caps convention in its own public communications.  If that's correct, it really defangs your main argument, Howard.

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David, in calling for "debate", who do you expect to participate? One of the basic differences between Wikipedia and Citizendium is that the role of an Editor. Editors have verified subject matter experience, and fill a role that does not exist at Wikipedia: acting as content authority, and, within reasonable limits, to make subject matter content decisions. I would agree that there should be a consensus among Editors in a given discipline, but, as I understand the Citizendium model, when it is a content matter, the consensus needs to be established among the Editors in that area.

Well...if you mean to lay down the law, then I think you should make it absolutely clear as soon as possible that you are doing so.  Then you should stop debating after concisely explaining your reasons, once.  Then, if David or anyone else has an objection, they can appeal to another authority.  They can try to get a debate going among the relevant CZ experts (which is, sadly, rarely tried); or they can appeal to me (as someone actually did do); or they can appeal to the Editorial Council.  But the fact that you are willing to argue at very great length indicates that you trying to persuade, not to force.  You should make up your mind about whether you are trying to persuade, or instead to force.  Just to be clear: I myself am engaging in persuasion (of you) at present.  I have not definitely resolved to overturn your decision.

As is the case so often in these sorts of disputes--which formerly we had frequently with Richard Jensen, who played the role of the expert who knows better--the question really comes down to what authority ought to decide this particular question.  You are I have no doubt an expert or an authority when it comes to interpreting the rules of internal military writing.  But it begs the question in your favor for you to assume that we should use those rules.  That we should follow those rules and those rules only, for all of our articles about military topics, is precisely what we are questioning, and you cannot settle that question by reference to your authority in military matters.  That is a more general question about editorial policy.

So let me sum up my own suggestions/conclusions/prayers:

(1) For military code names that refer to things that are virtually never discussed outside of military circles, we may indulge the experts by allowing them to use whatever convention they want to follow, on the theory that only those experts, or people who want to get similar expertise, will care about those articles.

(2) For military code names that do have currency in encyclopedias, newspapers, and other peer publishing sources, we should use conventions similar to theirs--just initial caps.  And this is because we are a general reference work, not a work "by and for" military experts.

I hope you will agree with me that this is a reasonable compromise.  David et al. get (2), while Howard gets (1).  I hope we might agree on this and not appeal to anybody's authority unnecessarily.
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« Reply #32 on: August 20, 2008, 12:38:57 AM »

P.S. Howard: you don't have to reply to all that.  Please don't.  Grin
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« Reply #33 on: August 20, 2008, 02:50:14 AM »

I have no problem with that. Thank you, Larry.

And Howard. I've learnt a lot today about keeping a cool head. I was wrong to fall prey to my emotions, and for that I apologise.

What chance we shake hands (virtual-style) and begin again?

Sincerely.
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« Reply #34 on: August 20, 2008, 11:17:30 AM »

I can certainly agree with the terms of Larry's quite reasonable compromise.
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All, I was asked to have a look and offer an opinion.  Having read through this conversation, I'm going to have to support (guess!) a compromise.  It never gives me no joy to step in and overrule any editor, so I of course want to have a go-around or two with you, Howard, if you are willing.  But you have explained yourself very well so far.  I am curious if you can be prevailed upon to reply explicitly to the actual merits of the arguments I am about to make
Of course, Larry.

First, if there is question that I am following a formal set of rules, I would ask that the article, for which  is significantly a prerequsite, compartmented control system, is read, where I would welcome specific comments that might be more detailed than here.

I would encourage looking at one of the footnotes at that article, where the editor of Parameters, the academic journal of the U.S. Army War College, made an editorial style judgment not to use all caps, against what he considered the recommendations of advisors. That, at least, is an opinion, contrary to mine, that is from a recognized editor with specific background, rather than random websites. I disagree with his decision, but I think my citing that shows that I am not oblivious to other interpretations.

This may be superfluous, but I'd like to put to bed any impressions that I am using all caps other than quite selectively. I offer examples such as the classified code name HAVE BLUE versus the name of the aircraft for which it was the prototype, the F-117 Nighthawk, and the basic C-130 Hercules, versus specific variation code name such as COMBAT TALON.

Also, I invite any to look at the article [[Gulf War]] and the subarticles for Operation DESERT SHIELD, Operation DESERT STORM, and Operation DESERT SABRE. While I have observed, for example, that I am puzzled about the intensity of the objection when, in desert storm, the all caps name is used in the title and first sense, four all caps names of military systems used once and once only, and the only repeated all caps name is SCUD. Forgive me for suggesting this is not exactly heavy usage.

An additional proposed compromise, revisited

Further, if you look back in the military forum, I have asked previously to find a complete and neutral alternative to the "spin" operation names, such as JUST CAUSE or IRAQI FREEDOM. I would much rather see the article titles there as "1989 U.S. military operations in Panama" and "2003 U.S. led military operations in Iraq." Yes, "Gulf War" works for the latter, but I can't think of any short name for the former.

I would prefer thee being titled "1990-1991 Coalition defense of Saudi Arabia", "1991 Coalition air operations against Iraq", and "1991 Ground operations in Kuwait and against Iraq". I would ask that I be able, in the lead, to give one all-caps designation saying "this is the formal name". I would much rather not use a propagandistic code name, which isn't even the real code name (No one ever heard of JUST CAUSE until reporters were told; BLUE SPOON) was the actual code word.  I'd propose redirects to these narrative names including "Desert Shield" and "DESERT SHIELD"

It might be useful to have a subpage of code names.

Before I get into this, though, let me just remind everybody that our standards of civility here are the same as on wiki talk pages...
I will merely state, for the record, that I was not trying to make anyone look foolish, and, when I asked about Australian ship names, I don't know the conventions and thought a citizen might. It was my assumption, right or wrong, that someone who had very strong opinions on military notation might have useful general military knowledge".
As to this from Martin:
According to Editorial Council Resolution 0011, which was recently passed, every workgroup has the right to set its own style and formatting provided that it is not blatantly inconsistent with CZ style. Although there seem to be some exceptions to the usage of uppercase for military operations, clearly it is the professional view of this editor that it is a norm for US codenamed operations. If he wishes to set it as a style for the workgroup, then (along with other editors for that workgroup) he may do so. I cannot imagine that the Editor-in-Chief will intervene as there is no "legal" basis for him to do so, but Citizens have the right to request such.
Well, let's be clear.  Howard has authority as an editor.  But he does not singly make up a workgroup; he is one editor, and one editor does not a workgroup make.  As such, I can indeed overrule him, Martin, and there are "legal" grounds for me to do so.  After all, if I have any Editor-in-Chief role in the project at all, one of them must be to interpret our editorial rules when they are not clear--as our naming conventions (and our workgroup decisionmaking rules for that matter) evidently are not, in this case.  Howard can try to get some other editors in his workgroup to support his position and overrule me, of course.  And also, the issue might be appealed, if anyone feels that is necessary, to the Editorial Council, which can revise its own resolutions if necessary.
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By habit (and lack of time), however, I feel it is a good idea to "pick my battles" wisely because the intrusion of "the law" into a problem, especially in a collaborative project, often creates more problems than it solves.  This particular battle seems important for me to wade into, simply because so many valuable Citizens seem to need more definitive closure.  Besides, I do think a reasonable compromise might be in the offing.
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Did you see how I made the analogy to my own Congressman, and how, while I certainly feel my opinions are heard, if we disagree on one vote but generally disagree. I accept his choice there and  move on. I do not belabor the point.

When I said democracy, I was thinking "direct democracy". What is closer is "representative democracy", or, as sometimes happens  (e.g., the "Challenger" disaster), the government appoints a review commission of apparently independent experts and generally follows their recommendation.  I'm not sure of an appropriate term for "advisers to an independent democracy",  but that's more what I had in mind: the antithesis of a New England town meeting.

Larrry, can you accept that distinction?

May I again saying that [[Gulf War]] is now in use for the highest-level article, and the code names are only found in the links and titles to the three main subarticles? For the specialist who would look up under code name, there can be redirects, although I would prefer to see movement away from code words in operation names, going instead to generic text. I still object to initial cap other than in redirects, as I don't want to look to what is, to me, a jarring notation while I edit the article.

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I freely admit that individual documents and organizations violate certain rules, but I see little choice but to use the authoritative U.S. references, as having the best chance of helping a reader read original materials, and to keep the articles here as consistent as possible.

It is irrelevant whether source documents or source organizations violate rules of ordinary publishing, because they are not ordinary publishers.  If we were a military organization, we might prefer to follow the usage; but we aren't, we are a reference project.  So it is perfectly acceptable that our standards be different.

This is a point others have made, obviously.  It is also a point that, as far as I can tell, you have never directly responded to, Howard.
I believe I have, but, if so, I obviously haven't communicated it. There are a couple of reasons that I prefer the source rules, designating one as classified development phase and one production, why I would use both HAVE BLUE and "F-117 Nighthawk".

The two areas where you will find me most reluctant to move from all caps are in the code words assigned for weapons systems, and the various markings used in security classification. In the former, there really are no "common names". Take a reasonably random example, RIVET JOINT. I can't speak for anyone else, but if I saw Rivet Joint, I'd initially wonder which pieces of metal were being joined by a rivet, and why. If I see a (usually) TWO WORD all-cap reference, or if anyone else can get accustomed to the convention, it identifies itself as a special usage, just as do Larry or Howard. Now, some code words, such as CLARINET PILGRIM, are sufficiently unusual that there is little chance of confusion, but I'd rather use the convention that makes it clear that an artificial convention in use.

There is a not-unrelated issue with classification markings. Something called SECRET is indicated as in a particular legal and handling secret. "secret" can and should apply to my ATM password. If someone writes "acording to the Secret document", I'm not sure if someone is using the term generically or specifically.

If I am not mistaken, you will want to insist that this doesn't ultimately matter and instead that what matters is what the Experts in this case--who work for the military--say the rule is.  But I want to point out carefully that this begs the question.  To assume that we should follow military-employed experts in this case is to say that the usage of those experts should determine our usage.  I believe I want to disagree with that, because experts sometimes do have idiosyncratic usage that does not comport with the usage of a general reference work such as CZ.  In other words, if CZ were a work by and for government-employed military experts, then it would make sense for usage to be determined by those experts.  But since CZ is a general reference work, our usage is determined by what is in common and recognizable currency among "peer publishers" such as other general encyclopedias, newspapers, magazines, and the like.
Larry, I hope it is realized that some of the reasons I want that usage is that there is that the U.S. military found that things can be ambigous when certain conventions are not followed. You should never see me write a British code name in other than initial cap only, because (1) initial cap only is British military style, (2) they don't have so many development programs, contingency plans, etc., such that ambiguity is likely and (3) they don't try to "spin" operation names. The Falklands operation was Operation Corporate and the Gulf War operation was Operation Granby.

The U.S. military does not use all caps on names, such as the "C-130 Hercules", or its armed variant, the "AC-130 Spectre". They do, however, use all caps when the words following the designation are a code name (see Compartmented Control System), such as MC-130 COMBAT TALON or RC-135 COBRA BALL.  Those are extensive modification of the basic plane, enough that the original name of "Hercules" or "Stratolifter" would no longer apply

Perhaps one compromise is using initial cap on operation names, and trying to avoid non-neutral operations names. All caps are acceptable  on non-public  code names of development projects, and classification and control markings (e.g., SECRET (specific) rather than Secret (???Is this the actual classification) vs. just being non-public. A real, not spin-doctor, code name like HAVE BLUE sets itself apart as being a real code name, while Have Blue is confusing -- have a blue what? In like manner, while I have other preferences about a completely neutral, if long, name, I could live with calling something "Operation Iraqi Freedom", the "spin" name, but leaving the real code name, POLO STEP in all caps, so no one automatically tries to make sense of the application of a game on horseback and an action in walking.

I am inclined to agree with your first sentence when the emphasis is on "in a discipline-specific article."  But what is a discipline-specific article?  Is "Operation DESERT STORM" a discipline-specific article?  No, it is not, not if by that phrase you mean a topic that is only treated within the field of military operations, analysis, or what have you.  I would not have any objection whatsoever to your using the specialist usage if the topic really is so specialized.  But let us be clear: merely because the leading experts about a topic are military experts who use all caps in their own documents, it does not follow that the topic is a "discipline-specific topic" in the sense you mean.
You would not hear the slightest complaint from  me if that which is called "Operation DESERT STORM" were titled "1991 US-led coalition air campaign against Iraq", or words to that effect, although there should be a note in the introduction that it was code named Operation DESERT STORM. While DESERT STORM isn't as bad as JUST CAUSE, I intensely dislike propagandistic code names. Nevertheless, when I have to use them, not having accepted, neutral generic language, I prefer to see them in a manner that doesn't seem jarring.

Discipline-specific? One is things that are clearly spin, partisan, and after-the-fact, such as DESERT SHIELD and IRAQI FREEDOM. I would prefer, for the former, to use DESERT SHIELD (all caps) once, identify it as the U.S. code name, and go on to speak of "Coalition defense of Saudi Arabia" The other are "proper" code names such as HAVE BLUE,deliberately meaningnless, and frankly, find easier to use because the typography clearly sets them as specific terms, rather than English words that could be distract with thying to fit them into context. Have a blue what?

I can't agree, for reasons I've outlined.  David gave the perfect reply to this, by the way: the military itself does not use the all-caps convention in its own public communications.  If that's correct, it really defangs your main argument, Howard.
If you'll allow a bit of military whimsy, it is said, in the U.S. military, that the difference between the Cub Scouts and the U.S. Air Force is that one has adult supervision. David has cited one and only one source, USAF public "factsheets". If it came to it, and I really hope it does not,  I suspect I could find a substantially greater number of military communications to the public in the manner than the example David selects, all from Air Force public data sheets at one website
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David, in calling for "debate", who do you expect to participate?...

Well...if you mean to lay down the law, then I think you should make it absolutely clear as soon as possible that you are doing so.  Then you should stop debating after concisely explaining your reasons, once. 
I accept that criticism. It had been my hope, especially with a newcomer like David, not to just say "We (imperial) have decided, but to give some background that indicated that my ruling was not ex cathedra from my navel;

Then, if David or anyone else has an objection, they can appeal to another authority.  ... But the fact that you are willing to argue at very great length indicates that you trying to persuade, not to force.  You should make up your mind about whether you are trying to persuade, or instead to force.  Just to be clear: I myself am engaging in persuasion (of you) at present.  I have not definitely resolved to overturn your decision.
I was trying to persuade; I was not doing this merely because I could. I'll simply say that there are additional but obscure reasons that I find this notation useful.
(1) For military code names that refer to things that are virtually never discussed outside of military circles, we may indulge the experts by allowing them to use whatever convention they want to follow, on the theory that only those experts, or people who want to get similar expertise, will care about those articles.
Is it fair to say that would cover specific weapons systems?  For example, is it acceptable to have the article  RC-135 RIVET JOINT, a communications intelligence aircraft? HAVE BLUE when one is talking about the classified prototype, and, as I have done, "F-117 Nighthawk" once a public announcement is made?  Would that also apply to security markings such as TOP SECRET/RD/SIOP/ESI?
(2) For military code names that do have currency in encyclopedias, newspapers, and other peer publishing sources, we should use conventions similar to theirs--just initial caps.  And this is because we are a general reference work, not a work "by and for" military experts.
I have never gotten  a response going about trying for neutral names that use neither classified code words or spin line "Operation Iraqi Freedom". POLO STEP makes no sense, "Operation Iraqi Freedom" is biased, but what about "2003 U.S.-led conventional invasion of Iraq", and "Post-invasion U.S. efforts to stabilize Iraq?" 
I hope you will agree with me that this is a reasonable compromise.  David et al. get (2), while Howard gets (1).  I hope we might agree on this and not appeal to anybody's authority unnecessarily.
I will, however, try even harder to use neutral language such as "US-led coalition defense of Saudi Arabia" then Operation Desert Shield. The former is even more informative to a nonspecialist. It is less concise, but is easier for me, since I write enough discipline-specific material that I don't want to get into the habit of writing Desert Storm and annoying my customer.
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See if anyone finds a subpage such as this helpful.  I'm open to other formats -- maybe a table with ALL CAPS, initial caps, explanations, and links where possible.
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« Reply #37 on: August 20, 2008, 02:37:37 PM »

See if anyone finds a subpage such as this helpful.  I'm open to other formats -- maybe a table with ALL CAPS, initial caps, explanations, and links where possible.

Seems a good idea to me. I am always insisting that we take full advantage of subpages...
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« Reply #38 on: August 21, 2008, 10:07:48 AM »

See if anyone finds a subpage such as this helpful.  I'm open to other formats -- maybe a table with ALL CAPS, initial caps, explanations, and links where possible.

Seems a good idea to me. I am always insisting that we take full advantage of subpages...

This is a separate topic, but as I have explained here, this is contrary to how subpages have been used and were originally intended to be used.  To avoid fragmenting the discussion, let's move any discussion of this topic to that talk page, please...
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« Reply #39 on: August 21, 2008, 10:10:57 AM »

Hi Howard--I don't often have as much time as I had when I made my earlier, very long post, and I can't possibly do justice to your most recent comment.  What should I focus on, to put a rest to this issue?  If I address your "additional proposed compromise," will that suffice?
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« Reply #40 on: August 21, 2008, 10:28:18 AM »

See if anyone finds a subpage such as this helpful.  I'm open to other formats -- maybe a table with ALL CAPS, initial caps, explanations, and links where possible.

Seems a good idea to me. I am always insisting that we take full advantage of subpages...

This is a separate topic, but as I have explained here, this is contrary to how subpages have been used and were originally intended to be used.  To avoid fragmenting the discussion, let's move any discussion of this topic to that talk page, please...

Subpages have been moved as you requested.
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« Reply #41 on: August 21, 2008, 10:42:41 AM »

Hi Howard--I don't often have as much time as I had when I made my earlier, very long post, and I can't possibly do justice to your most recent comment.  What should I focus on, to put a rest to this issue?  If I address your "additional proposed compromise," will that suffice?

So we are discussing the same things, I think that code words are inherently problematic. Articles dealing with wars, military operations, etc. -- as distinct from military systems/equipment and military units -- should have, as the primary article title, as neutral a title as "(year) military operations in (place)". 

Obviously, things like World War II and Korean War are exceptions, but I honestly don't know the best neutral names for such things as the Panama and Grenada interventions. I don't think it would be terribly biased to call it '1989 U.S. intervention in Panama". Grenada was, in theory, a coalition, although I'd have to look up the name of the group of Caribbean countries that officially endorsed it, although I don't think they had any boots on the ground.

Assume "1989 U.S. intervention in Panama". It happened in 1989, U.S. military forces were clearly present, and the events took place in Panama. To me, that's pretty neutral. Noam Chomsky might not like it, but that hardly breaks my heart.

There would then be redirects to it including:

Operation Just Cause
Operation JUST CAUSE
Operation BLUE SPOON
Operation Blue Spoon (although I'd really be surprised if anyone interested in BLUE SPOON would be bothered by caps)

There was a very brief name of a United States Southern Command numbered operations plan, which I'd have to look up. It's basically a footnote at best.

In the first paragraph of the article, JUST CAUSE and BLUE SPOON would be mentioned in caps, because that is the way they were released.  I recommend, rather than calling it Just Cause, avoiding any specific code names, politicized or real, unless they are links to other articles. "Just Cause" has opportunities for ambiguity. I doubt anyone would find Blue Spoon ambiguous, but anything is possible.

Never attribute to malice or manipulation what can adequately be explained by ignorance. When Clinton ordered a cruise missile strike against Iraq, I remember disbelief among military colleages, about why they would have named the operation after the (we thought) widely known nickname of Generalfeldmarschall Erwin Rommel. Apparently, no one in the Clinton White House knew that reference.

It has been my intention, in this note, not to indicate my personal value judgments on these operations. I'm willing to say, but I hope I have stayed neutral.
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« Reply #42 on: August 21, 2008, 01:43:36 PM »

Howard, that sounds reasonable to me, but you are now addressing a different question than the one we were debating.  We were not debating the question, "What should we do about the names of U.S. military operations, as a general point of policy?"  I don't have time (or expertise) to address that or evaluate your proposal about it.  (So, go ahead and implement it if others don't object!)  The question we were debating is whether (and when) all caps should be used in titles and in article text.  What should I focus on about that question?  Another related question is: which among your article titles will we have to revise?
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« Reply #43 on: August 21, 2008, 03:06:28 PM »

Howard, that sounds reasonable to me, but you are now addressing a different question than the one we were debating.  We were not debating the question, "What should we do about the names of U.S. military operations, as a general point of policy?"  I don't have time (or expertise) to address that or evaluate your proposal about it.  (So, go ahead and implement it if others don't object!)  The question we were debating is whether (and when) all caps should be used in titles and in article text.  What should I focus on about that question?  Another related question is: which among your article titles will we have to revise?

My recommendation is that when the article title, according to the appropriate specification (e.g., the Joint Chiefs of Staff NICKA database description), should be in all caps, the original article title (e.g., Operation DESERT STORM) should be all caps, and the all caps should be used, once, in the introductory sentence. There should also be a redirect to Operation Desert Storm, and, in the body of the article, I'm willing to say that the initial-cap-only should be used subsequently, as long as you are willing to accept that using initial-cap-only might be ambiguous in a particular article.

Offhand, a real-world example is writing something about warfare in the Middle East, which refers to WWII military history in the same article speaking of the 1998 cruise missile attack on Iraq. (the) "Desert Fox", as a historical reference, could be referring to Erwin Rommel, so making clear that DESERT FOX refers to the operation is a useful disambiguation.  This won't happen all that often, as code names (as opposed to spin doctor names) are not supposed to suggest the actual operation or anything that could be confused with them. I would be very impressed with anyone who found a way to make Clarinet Pilgrim ambiguous. Senior Year, however, which refers to a system on the U-2 aircraft, very well could be ambiguous.
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« Reply #44 on: August 21, 2008, 03:20:02 PM »

I'd be happy with that compromise (once in all caps, evermore not).

Any disambiguation could be simply dealt with in context, either by using terms such as "codenamed" or "Operation", etc., or by a brief parenthetical explanation.

This would minimise use of all caps (although I still say it's entirely unnecessary, but let's not start that again ...  Roll Eyes ) and add clarity at the same time.
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